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True Finds

In love am I with a great deal of things Of wonders on earth, of darker shadowy background Of artists, of ghouls, of nature’s fools Of genius soaked in all matter of internal sound Who knows what cradles these concepts, what lies beneath the admiration —the reality The minute…disappointment—it is naught There it is not until the light hits the bay Every single detail displayed And oh, how my judgment is frayed! By your unfathomable beauteous words, by images I receive so absurd I imagine lives untold—I fantasize a fib And make out with it—TRUTH, with darkened veneration Baffling me, filtering me with joy and mysterious longing As if by heaven the song sung is from below Rested on the meadows of our minds And in our hearts True…treasurable….finds…

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Date: 2/26/2013 9:38:00 AM
thank you for your dropping by dear sweet friend Laura... am stopping here to enjoy your lovely poem so well written and beautiful..i do really enjoyed this much .. <3 all the best dearest one <3 Sk
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Date: 2/26/2013 8:29:00 AM
True finds are the treasures that we find when we are not looking. and are able to hang on to them. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 2/25/2013 8:17:00 PM
You can find a lot of good or bad things wherever you search. Good descriptive write.
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Date: 2/20/2013 10:01:00 PM
"Rested on the meadows of our minds." Beauteous! :o) (Like the new pic)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/21/2013 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Dan! <3 ~Laura
Date: 2/20/2013 1:49:00 PM
I know that your are one of my great findings Laura - your light has traversed my 'bay' for sure - so nice to read a write which thanks Life for all the possibilities - keep fantasizing my friend - 'As if by Heaven the song sung is from below, rested on the meadows of of our minds, and in our hearts...' I repeat this beautiful expression from respect - J.A.B. %
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/20/2013 9:22:00 PM
Aw, thanks Justin. . .I will - so glad to share my work with you and read yours as well. ~Laura
Date: 2/19/2013 6:40:00 PM
Laura, this a very insightful description of cognition and perception, and it is a very enjoyable read. You are quite a talent. I find it interesting that the truth of the perception or vision can sometimes be a disappointment. That is-if even the present view can be trusted. But what you describe is such fun--I hope I can enjoy it all for a while longer. I do wish you well, and I thank you for this treasure.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/20/2013 9:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Duke! I am so glad you enjoyed. ~Laura
Date: 2/18/2013 9:39:00 PM
Beautifully writen.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/20/2013 9:19:00 PM
Thank you John, for the support. I deeply appreciate it. ~Laura

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