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True Essence

Religion holy, peaceful serving, loving, dedicating harbingers, wishers, speakers, sellers separating, competing, fighting narrow, isolated community community selfish, bellicose hating, disbelieving, thinking saints, bishops, saviors, pioneers committing, secularizing, uniting fraternal, human Religion SOUHARDYA GOSWAMI, INDIA (The poem was written by my son Souhardya Who is 14+ years old. He is inspired by every great poet in POETRYSOUP.)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2016 3:46:00 PM

tell your son he is showing signs of a budding poet! LIke father, like son!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2016 11:03:00 PM

sandip, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/25/2015 2:39:00 AM

This is extremely excellence, a wonderful penned, oh he is great..........A.M.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/24/2015 11:47:00 PM

Your Diamante has hit the target; beautifuly done.

Skat A

Date: 7/6/2015 10:26:00 PM

lovely diamante:), enjoyed reading ~Luv SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/6/2015 10:15:00 PM

Excellent double Diamante! I congratulate your son on this brilliant piece especially since it was penned by one so young! BRAVO and I rate it a solid "7"! Warmest regards. Pandita

Judy Konos

Date: 7/6/2015 7:05:00 AM

Excellent Poetry as usual...remember as Charmaine said, avoid salt.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/5/2015 6:14:00 PM

Religion can indeed help us get closer or divides us.. A great message from your 'son'. Re yr comjent : I'm sorry for your 'High blood pressure',Eat plenty of garlic, and avoid salt : ). Guess I told you that already .