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True Companions

True Companions There’s a finite place in a life’s ill-defined time, an Alice-like membrane, if you will, when at the instant of passing through, presence and absence co-exist, life and death are true companions. I know a thing or two about this side, the presence from which I write of love and pain, uncertainty, insanity, birthday cake with ice cream, childhood memories, bullies, the touch of my lover. My-knowing isn’t all-knowing, of course. Lives cross and diverge, only to meet again at that instant of passing-through, bringing into question, what’s on the other side? Go ask Alice. I think she’ll know.

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Date: 10/19/2013 6:43:00 PM
Another brilliant piece, I am adding you as a favorite poet and adding this poem to my favorites as well. I enjoy your Haiku but these longer poems are where you really shine. You are a talented guy Jack.
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Date: 10/19/2013 11:44:00 PM
Richard, I am truly honored... Jack
Date: 9/11/2013 11:40:00 AM
I love your poem. Life and death go hand in hand, you can't have one without the other. As to your question on what's on the other side - I hope we find a beautiful new world with the love and peace, we could not find here. Sorry to say, I don't know Alice. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 9/11/2013 12:54:00 PM
Alice: "White Rabbit," written by Grace Slick with the Jefferson Airplane c. 1965 - 66: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WANNqr-vcx0 Thanks for the great comment.. Jack
Date: 9/11/2013 9:25:00 AM
Well this had my mind in a bend. Nicely done!!! :)
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Date: 9/11/2013 9:33:00 AM
Everyone needs a mind-bender now and then... Jack
Date: 9/11/2013 2:22:00 AM
- Alice knows the most part she told me .... EVERYTHING !!!! :)))) - Well written, my friend, Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/11/2013 6:45:00 AM
Grace Slick knows too... Jack

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