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Troubled Waters

If If you need the love and guidance you you only need to ask need need, the breeding ground of love a a hand shake says it all friend friend the word is written I'm I'm the strengh behind support Sailing Sailing into problems right right between the masks of fate behind behind the words of freedom like like the cousins on a lake over over-coming life delussions trouble trouble rears it's deadly face water Water like the tears of life I I become the burdan king Will Will the problems not defeat us Ease Ease your troubles and your woes your your dreams become our focus mind Mind your manors as we grow

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Date: 3/10/2014 10:27:00 AM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2014 6:29:00 AM
hi congrats on win hugs
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:44:00 AM
Flowing verse with lovely acrostic. Congrats on the win. bernard
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Date: 3/9/2014 9:59:00 PM
Bernard, wonderful to think a handshake is as good as your word still, enjoyable poem about friendship, congratulations
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Date: 3/9/2014 7:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/9/2014 7:01:00 PM
Bernard, this is good, but you are missing some lines as of today. Check your spelling also. Cheers, Roy
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