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Tropical Blooms

A slice of sun rises over Oahu like a pineapple ripened to yellow-gold; an island paradise under drapes of blue shining in morning mist on hibiscus, bold. Behold the beauty of Hawaiian legend - in tropical breezes, blooms sway, tilt and bend, and hammocks of petals drenched in bright arrays are made into splendor of welcoming leis. for Anthony Slausen's Encounters with Flowers Contest, 11/24/14

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Date: 12/5/2014 8:20:00 PM
It is a cold winter's day here, so it was nice to read about the beauty of a warm tropical island... Congratulations on your win with this lovely write, Rhonda!
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Date: 12/1/2014 9:23:00 AM
Hi Rhonda, This is a calming, charming and rhythmic poem with a natural flow to it. A very enjoyable read. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl
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Date: 11/28/2014 7:16:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Rhonda
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Date: 11/28/2014 7:10:00 PM
WoW, I am speechless, you are a gifted poet. A Fav for me, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/28/2014 3:26:00 PM
congratulations on your much deserved win,great poem
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Date: 11/28/2014 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations...I thought this would be on the winners' list.
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Date: 11/28/2014 11:40:00 AM
you painted such a wonderful picture - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/25/2014 7:54:00 AM
Ah, so beautiful Rhonda. You have chosen a place of many peoples dreams and described it beautifully. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/25/2014 6:12:00 AM
You have painted an amazingly beautiful scene. Should be a winner.
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Date: 11/25/2014 5:08:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Reads like a winner to me..It is very descriptive and expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/24/2014 11:02:00 PM
A lovely entry for the contest, Rhonda. Best wishes.
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Date: 11/24/2014 10:48:00 PM
You have it perfectly Rhonda, and I live here so I know. Our state flower, the hibiscus blooms year round and is also called the China Rose. I loved your poem! #7 I hope it is a big winner!
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