Troika

A luminous star Three seeking philosophers The infant Jesus _____________________________ 24/12/2016

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Rainbow Promise

Date: 1/7/2017 6:19:00 AM

"Three seeking philosophers." I just realized that they were. Seeking the place where the Star would stop. Beautiful Haiku. Haven't heard from you in a while. Cheers, Rainbow.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/7/2017 6:58:00 AM

Thank you ...

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/24/2016 10:57:00 AM

Lovely one... Perfect Christmas Haiku... Very neatly done... A big 7... Merry Christmas....

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/24/2016 7:08:00 PM

Thank you, Merry Christmas ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/24/2016 8:39:00 AM

Divine! Merry Christmas my friend, Probir! A seven! (since you included philosophers, haha)

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/24/2016 6:58:00 PM

Thank you, Merry Christmas ...

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/24/2016 8:33:00 AM

Beautiful, Probir. How can that not be perfect? Ah think of it - to be a philosopher back then, on the desert. Think of that clear, pure air.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/24/2016 6:59:00 PM

Thank you, Merry Christmas ...