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Triumph of the Soul

As I wandered alone without a task All around me wild flowers sprang forth My face a sad contorted mask Of emotionless strife since birth My eyelids closed against the day Enjoying the fall of darkness on my Earth The sun tried to spread its ray The sweet smelling fruit kissed my head As beneath the mighty mango tree I lay The deep red scars on my heart fled When a strange melody on my fancy grew And the balm of stillness on my limbs spread An unknown peace I soon knew When the leaves danced with the breeze The shadows of my life I threw The butterflies and the bees On me did comfort heap That amazingly I found under this tree My shallow life and forgotten sleep This wilderness made new With pleasure my heart started to weep The grave cares now seemed so few My life found a new definition And into the azure sky my soul flew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/15/2014 12:45:00 PM
Well written Tahera.... Enjoyed my visit... Verlena
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Date: 8/13/2011 10:56:00 AM
Congrats Tahera my friend on this poem making it to first round competition .. in PS contest.. good luck luv..
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Date: 8/7/2011 12:00:00 PM
Many congratulations Tahera on making it to first round of winners in Poetrysoup contest. Winning wishes for the final round. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:37:00 PM
such a skilled use of form! so glad to see you moving up! light & love
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Date: 8/3/2011 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Tahera. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2011 12:47:00 AM
very natural... true words that touch one's heart......loved you write
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Date: 8/2/2011 2:00:00 PM
Well done.
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Date: 8/1/2011 10:38:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your terza rima being featured. Vince
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2011 8:38:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful winning poem to share with us all my friend with luv...
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Date: 4/26/2011 1:50:00 PM
Many congrats on your win : )
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Catie's contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 9:29:00 AM
I am glad you found your peace. Nature is the place to go. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/26/2011 9:21:00 AM
What wonderful imagery. Nicely rhymed and nice flow too - especially with the end when your soul flies away. It's beautiful.
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:40:00 AM
I think your writing helps you to fly! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/29/2010 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations Tahera on your well deserved featured poem, I love the imageries formed within the lines of this beautifully penned terza rima. Thank you for sharing the read ;-) Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 11/29/2010 6:34:00 AM
A well deserved featured poem you have here Tahera. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 5:32:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a great one to share with us all today with luv..
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:53:00 PM
Beautiful, the soul so free:)
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Date: 11/24/2010 3:50:00 PM
I enjoyed this flowing thoughts on the nature's beauties, tahera
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:49:00 PM
This is very peaceful, like a comforting dream for you. it's nice to see you experimenting with poetry forms, Tahera. I think I have done one terza rima in my life. Happy thanksgiving to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/24/2010 12:47:00 PM
what a beauty this is, Tahera! One can definitely find solace among nature and just feel that beauty and be comforted by it! I definitely loved how you described everything here, and with a mango tree too ;) Have you ever tried eating mangoes right under the tree where it came from? Bliss! This poem of yours just spoke to me--going to my faves :) let your soul soar, Tahera! :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 11/24/2010 11:43:00 AM
Smile ~ Ahhh "Yes," the beautiful melodies of life & breath & hope & dreams; "Love," whispered upon the breeze anew; the canvas of "Creation," speaking amid tones of glittering colours once thought lost but, calling now, from beyond the deep ~ Smile, "Brilliantly Beautiful Painting 'My Dear, Precious & Priceless Tahera Mannan;' A Fave" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Holiday My Dear, Amid The Palms of Natures 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 11/24/2010 11:39:00 AM
When our souls fly to the heavens, we leave all the earthly strife behind us. You receive much comfort as well as inspiration from nature, Tahera. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:04:00 AM
Nature has nurtured you back to health! Very good symmetry and flow to this poem. Nice nature allegory.
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