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Tripping

Tripping She's tripping over memories of those red flags she had. It seems to her the good times are far outweighed by bad. She's running out of patience she's run out of things to say. She asked God give me one reason to make me want to stay. She listened for a moment to the silence in the air. She smiled and said there ain't one or like me You just don't care. She packed up her belongings and she called a moving van. She could have trained an army with the time spent on one man. She smiled again as she thought about when he walked in that door. When he sees what didn't matter matters less now than before. She left a table by his easy chair and by the lamp she left a note. She wondered if he'd bother even reading what she wrote. This song and dance was over long before it even started. You took me for a fool that you easily outsmarted. No good deed goes unpunished now my good deeds are through. The kind of man you chose to be has now caught up to you. There's warm beer on the counter your dog is at your brothers. Don't bother trying to call me I'll be staying at your mothers. Edwin C Hofert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/27/2015 8:14:00 AM
Nice easy read, I wonder how many men do not put in the effort all the best Bernie
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Date: 3/27/2015 5:27:00 AM
Edwin I found this poem very easy to read. Nice flow. Look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to poetrysoup!!
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Date: 3/26/2015 11:35:00 PM
I can also see how your poems can be made into country music I enjoyed it.
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Date: 3/26/2015 5:07:00 PM
Great poetry, Tripping is definitely, "gripping" excellent work.
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Date: 3/26/2015 5:04:00 PM
Great poetry, Tripping is definitely, "gripping" excellent work. Pauline White
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Date: 3/26/2015 2:22:00 PM
I don't get the 1st 2 lines of the penultimate verse, but enjoyed it anyway. God Bless. D.
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Date: 3/26/2015 2:01:00 PM
Great write!
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Date: 3/26/2015 1:19:00 PM
Poetry is as vast as the universe. Delivery is what keeps ones attention. The content tells the story and opens windows and doors to one's imagination. Poet my Friend, you achieve nthe goals. thanks for a delite. RAVENLEE
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Date: 3/26/2015 12:52:00 PM
Edwin: Very good. I see someone has commented on another of your poems saying it would fit a country song (I paraphrase) and I can see that. Many of 'smaller' ones are ripe for that treatment. Congratulations.
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