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Trip To the Creek

Going on the mule To that special place On the creek enjoying The cool water negative Ions that refresh one's Soul, restoration of Spirit for it had been A week since time to restore Rocky running, playing Off and on the mule Disappears, wonder Where that dogs gone Probably off finding Really stinky bone Bleat, bleat, bleat What is that sound Is it a goat or sheep Where is the world Would that be coming From, there are not Any of those animals Around here, at least There has not been In years and years Rocky comes into View with something Hugh in his mouth It is being swung Back and forth Back and forth Long legs, very long legs Why it is a baby deer He is so proud of his catch How does one explain To a rat terrier that Deer does not fit Into the catagory Of small farm prey That is on the list Of animals that he kills

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Date: 9/10/2009 3:18:00 PM
Excellent write Sara, I enjoyed this very much! God Bless Cody
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Date: 9/5/2009 12:54:00 PM
You have a wonderful style of writing, Sara. I especially enjoyed the peacefulness in this one. I look forward to reading more of yours ~Leander P.S. Thank you for your comment on my most recent poem. :)
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Date: 9/4/2009 4:04:00 PM
Oh my Sara, what a kool poem - and what a dog. This was a delight to read>>James
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Date: 9/4/2009 3:16:00 PM
Sara, I really liked this poem. It brought me to a peaceful beautiful place while reading it. In your comment on one of my poems you mentioned for me to soup mail you. I'm not quite sure how to do that since I'm very new at this. Any assistance would be appreciated.
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Date: 9/4/2009 1:38:00 PM
Enjoyable reading, Sara! Thanks for sharing! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/4/2009 1:11:00 PM
Great bit of writing here Sara... This site and its members are so inspirational and motivational, so beneficial to my stress level being at its lowest in years.... Thank you Sara for the part you play......:JP]
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