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Trim This With Laces

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Trim This With Laces

I would like to trim this with laces 
And trace your lips slowly
(if I wouldn't wake you)
The early morning's cool air
Cheering birds and bright light
Always seem to keep you asleep
And me, a dash happy sentimental
Hanging ornaments somewhere in my mind
Having found a home and charm
Wide awake under your arm 

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  1. Date: 6/19/2010 2:44:00 PM
    A very nice poem filled with gentle images amongst a soft, yearning atmosphere....very dreamy. Chris.

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 2:38:00 PM
    Love this poem thank you for the good read ~!~Heather~!~

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 2:02:00 PM
    Sounds very charming, with lots of love. nice tender words used in your poem. Have a nice one,..p.d.