Trial Run

Trial run He said I said We tried He couldn’t I didn’t Goodbye

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Nigel Fawcett

Date: 11/13/2008 12:14:00 AM

I got a nice smile out of this Barbara, but I suspect there is a deeper story behind this abbreviated account. Love, Nigel

Daver Austin

Date: 11/12/2008 11:07:00 AM

Musta been a blind date, eh? If given enough time there are, no doubt, several interpretations possible, which, after all, makes a good poem. Good poem, Barb. Love, daver

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/12/2008 6:58:00 AM

That say is all! No need to ramble on, guess we know what happened! Cute poem!! ~Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/12/2008 5:43:00 AM

You got to the point very quickly. You tried and that all that matter. The poem is wonderful, direct and strong.

Michael Torres

Date: 11/12/2008 2:11:00 AM

This is fabulous a relationship which is microwaved into word's. I love this one Barbara. Poor guy though, but maybe he had it coming lol. Excellent write. Why aren't poet's commenting on your great works? They are missing out on talent. Michael Torres