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Trespassing Moonlight

trespassing moonlight caressing your sleeping face sweat beads glistening your face is bright summer sky sleepless night's secret love scene. © kashinath karmakar (11th July 2011) =============00============== Placement:HM ; (July 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Date:11th July 2011 Contest:Tanka You Sponsor:Francine Roberts

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Elaine George

Date: 7/18/2011 11:30:00 AM

Beautiful Tanka, Kash. Many congrats on your HM. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 10:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kashinath in the contest of Francine M. Roberts "Tanka You". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/17/2011 5:52:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of Francine, kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2011 1:08:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this creative work..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 7/17/2011 8:53:00 AM

congrats on your hm in the contest with this romantic take on the theme, I think it's beautifully written (I would've placed it much higher!) :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/16/2011 9:52:00 PM

Congrats Kash on your HM in Summer Nights luv with this masterpiece poetry ..luv this one..

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/16/2011 9:23:00 PM

congrats Kashinath on your Honorable Mention in the contest

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/12/2011 9:55:00 AM

Enjoyed this Kash ;) all the best for the contest.. Soupmail returned!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2011 7:00:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Kashinath. Love, Carol

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/12/2011 4:10:00 AM

Very poetic and well thought-out poem. Perfect title for this piece! I'm sure this will score very highly!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2011 11:39:00 PM

This is absolutely beautiful, Kashinath. HOw I wish I had time to even think for these many contests going on right now. I sure hope this scores high for you, my friend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/11/2011 10:09:00 PM

love how you expressed your crossing the twilight zone,, kash.. whoot! come visit! :) huggs with winning streaks, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2011 8:17:00 PM

oh so sweetly penned and touching to the heart Kash.. good luck in the contest my friend.. summer nights should all be as this one..luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 7/11/2011 2:57:00 PM

Enjoyed my sleepless night!