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Trembling

Trembling as the day approached trailing a thunderous storm darkness moved in fast earth trembling in the cold wind nature bursts with emotion
For Tanka me a sad song contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/24/2012 3:54:00 PM
I really like this one, Erich. Congrats on the HM
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Erich Goller
Date: 10/24/2012 8:51:00 PM
thank you very much Andrea,Hugs!Erich
Date: 10/24/2012 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Erich. Love, Carol
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Erich Goller
Date: 10/24/2012 12:15:00 PM
thank you very much Carol. Hughs!Errich
Date: 10/24/2012 4:16:00 AM
CONGRATS ERICH ON AN AWESOME WRITE AND WIN .. LUV IT LUV ..
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Erich Goller
Date: 10/24/2012 12:14:00 PM
thank you very much Linda,Hugs!Erich
Date: 10/23/2012 7:13:00 PM
ERICH, congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD
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Erich Goller
Date: 10/24/2012 12:13:00 PM
thank you very much,Hugs!Erich
Date: 10/23/2012 2:16:00 PM
E, Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy
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Erich Goller
Date: 10/23/2012 3:42:00 PM
thank you very much Skat,Hugs!Erich
Date: 10/20/2012 8:32:00 PM
Love the images you have drawn.
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Erich Goller
Date: 10/20/2012 9:19:00 PM
thank you very much Joann,Hugs!Erich
Date: 10/10/2012 1:32:00 PM
Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Erich. Love, Carol
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Erich Goller
Date: 10/13/2012 9:13:00 PM
thank you very much carol, Your welcome. Hugs!Erich
Date: 10/8/2012 3:48:00 PM
a great tanka about the storm.
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Erich Goller
Date: 10/8/2012 3:51:00 PM
thank you very much Joann,Hugs!Erich

Book: Shattered Sighs