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I noticed her two weeks ago. She flew into my physics lab like hell itself was after her and tripped as she sat down. She's always late for classes, stammers her apologies, flustered and myopic, her glasses primly perched upon her nose. Accident-prone, she barreled through the library like Grant attacking Richmond, giggling nervously as she checked out her books. To me she is a treasure, a whirling dervish dressed in black and white, always black and white, like for her it's some particular religion. I asked her to the movies. She acted like I was the first who'd ever taken interest, she was flattered but she flatly and decidedly said no. She had thrown down the gauntlet, so I set out to woo her with my wit and charm, taking every opportunity to bump into her when and where I could. Finally she acquiesced, and when she slowed down enough to smile and chat and laugh and joke with me my heart was hers to keep!

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Date: 2/3/2016 9:08:00 PM
Hey, is this a true story? if so, it sounds wonderful that your wooing worked!! Love the title . Reminds me of that cool song on the radio!!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/4/2016 4:46:00 AM
Kinda true... it's actually a combination of two girls I knew in college... the one dressed in black was a Wiccan, the other was a bookworm... Thanks Andie! Keith
Date: 2/3/2016 9:07:00 PM
thanks so much for finally seeing Behind his Knowing Eyes, Keith. Now let me read this new one of yours.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/4/2016 4:46:00 AM
Yeah... sorry it took so long! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 2/3/2016 5:25:00 PM
I loved the way you built up the tension to the delightful happy ending to the poem Keith:-) hugs jan xxx7
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/3/2016 5:29:00 PM
Thanks Jan... no rhyming this time, but it wasn't really necessary. Best wishes, Keith

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