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Treason - Doppelganger

Doppelganger Treason Creeping in total darkness, No wait for any sunshine, Day he betrayed my true love, passion bled to death. All yearnings laid to rest, bliss was only a deceit, Wreathed my soul, whipped unsaid words of treacherousness. Written Dec 7th, 2015 For contest by Alfred Vassallo

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Date: 12/8/2015 4:00:00 PM
I liked seeing this one you wrote. If it is not on the winner list, It would probably be for the fact that the second stanza did not make a direct contrast to the first one. Well written!
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