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Transparently Wild Sentinel

TRANSPARENTLY WILD. Sentinel. Ghosh! a cataclysmic mega quake in its menace, rumbling tertiary large water wall roars. Engulfs the red shining bright cutie sentinella, that stands melancholic but firm with no fears. Oh! the rustle of the wavy crescendo and a thud, merciless devastation proceeds to swallow. Coarse tsunami heads for its mission, hopefully peeps the light with glow facing the throw. Yes! come what may,it will not budge, to direct,protect land and save more lives. To save mother earth from severe wounds, under its surveillance,its foresight thrives. Ah! the fierce aggressive waves carry on, changing colours from white,crystal to beige, All the more cinderous it gets expanding on shore. In its struggle, the lighthouse will not age. Quatrains with line 2 and 4 with same rhyme and same syllables. 1 st quatrain-11 syllables. 2 nd quatrain-12 syllables. 3 rd quatrain-10 syllables. 4 th quatrain-10 syllables. Contest:Sentinel. Sponsor:Eve Roper. 11/2/2016

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Date: 4/26/2016 12:52:00 AM
Awesome win Rizwana... Linda
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Date: 4/15/2016 12:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/11/2016 12:13:00 PM
thank you...truly humbled by your comment...I ve changed the look...grateful for your observation....best wishes
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Date: 4/11/2016 5:26:00 AM
Looks nice (except those within brackets though), sounds nice, throws up pictures nice, in keeping with the action, terror and the likes as desired by the sponsor...Great..GL..Probir
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