Get Your Premium Membership

"transition"

Transition from the mind’s condition revealed God’s unconditional love! I had been my own man within usual concepts, I needed transition from carnal mind’s inept, I realized error of my ways. By God’s love, precious style, reconciled! Of social resigned, I was own worst enemy… unconsciously blind! Living my mind’s illusions, not mindful of power source! Having lived natural incline, was paranoid schizophrenic, of the flesh, nothing authentic, miscommunications of mind. Now I dwell in graces complete, and all new commitments I make, having lived natural incline, I have spirit's eugenics. Love’s composition not of mind, transitional maturity, in the grace of love’s purity, most heavenliest, top of line, having lived natural incline. For: Trois Par Huit Rondel In Honor of Jared Pickett

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/14/2019 8:40:00 AM
A deep, wonderfully penned piece....
Login to Reply
Date: 10/13/2019 10:26:00 PM
superb and heavenly written///
Login to Reply
Date: 11/8/2010 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, john
Login to Reply
Date: 11/7/2010 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win John in Jared Pickett's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 11/7/2010 1:41:00 PM
John ..well deserved HM in contest. Gud usage of all three forms Luv/Best wishes....Hitendra Mehta cecil
Login to Reply
Date: 11/7/2010 8:32:00 AM
Congrats Moses on your HM in Jared's contest with this amazing and superbly written entry luv.. enjoy a special honor all your own my friend this wonderful Sunday with lots of luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 11/7/2010 7:14:00 AM
I must have missed this when I was on the road, John. How true that "Love's composition" is not of the mind. Your spiritual qualities are well conveyed in this insightful poem, dear friend. Congratulations on your success in Jared's contest! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 10/2/2010 3:38:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this great write that reads like winners' circle to me..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 10/2/2010 6:36:00 AM
~Oh HappyDay~ I enjoyed reading your Amazing poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration John. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2010 3:49:00 PM
Nice one for contest...good luck
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2010 1:35:00 PM
good write!! flows like smooth milk in hot coffee! good to the last drop!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2010 1:35:00 PM
Very wonderful entry to the contest, John
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2010 1:12:00 PM
Interesting.... this is the most creative specimen I've ever seen from a christian (if u r 1). Curious about if u have the ability to interpret a bible, too...? But what's wrong w/ being schizophrenic?!? I think it improves poetry a bit if used properly...
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2010 12:10:00 PM
Awesome Moses.. powerful Tankas to tell the inspirational message... enjoyed my friend ..u are the bridge between souls and poetry luv..
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs