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Below is the poem entitled Transfixed which was written by poet Dave Will. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Transfixed

Transfixed, suspended,  
as geese caught in overnight ice
awaiting  dawn and sun's warmth.
Static, lost in a dream 
I can't remember
but never really forget.

Copyright © Dave Will

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  1. Date: 5/4/2015 7:20:00 AM
    Oh I like the image you created here, it's perfect.

    Will Avatar Dave Will
    Date: 5/5/2015 2:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Casarah, one of those images that came, I jotted it down and let it be.
  1. Date: 5/3/2015 8:43:00 PM
    David, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

    Will Avatar Dave Will
    Date: 5/5/2015 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Skat
  1. Date: 5/3/2015 7:50:00 PM
    Dave, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

    Will Avatar Dave Will
    Date: 5/5/2015 2:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda, It is funny with the short ones, we dash then off and mostly forget about them - until ......
  1. Date: 2/27/2014 10:10:00 AM
    It makes me think of a tale where a flock of geese stuck in a lake all flew together and lifted the lake to another location.

    Will Avatar Dave Will
    Date: 2/27/2014 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, I hadn't heard that one, but have heard that if ice is thick enough foxes can have a great morning.
  1. Date: 2/16/2014 10:36:00 AM
    Nice one!

    Will Avatar Dave Will
    Date: 2/16/2014 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks