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Tranquil Thoughts

as the peace` engulfed me I... felt enthralled and tranquil..

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Adell Foster

Date: 9/9/2008 5:07:00 AM

I love the serene feel of the read, this is a verry lovely write, I thank you for sharing and for your wonderful comments on my poetry as well :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Derrick Burton

Date: 9/7/2008 9:38:00 PM

wow, great poem, wish I was blessed with the few word talent.

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/7/2008 1:09:00 PM

Finaly! JHL

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/7/2008 10:06:00 AM

Beautiful piece Deneen. God Bless Phyl

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/6/2008 11:23:00 AM

This is wonderful. That's a part of what it's supposed to do. The piece flows very well. Great job! ~Joseph

James Foulk

Date: 9/6/2008 10:58:00 AM

short but sweet, a great poem. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comments

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 9/6/2008 4:28:00 AM

Love the last line, as it is so very true...the body hums when in that state. Love Kristin