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Tranquil Moments

Crashing waves of peace, On the open sandy beach. The clouds fill the sky.

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Lena Townsend

Date: 3/3/2009 6:59:00 AM

Perfect form and the imagery is amazing. I can picture the beach. Very tranquil indeed. Smiles from Lolita

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/26/2009 7:51:00 AM

They most certainly are tranquil! Excellent form, flow and imagery. Michael

Daniel Neal

Date: 2/24/2009 2:57:00 AM

Tranquil it is and inspiring. This has great visuals. DN

Belinda Parish

Date: 2/23/2009 9:19:00 PM

Makes me want to be at the beach...Smile!

Chris Goombi

Date: 2/23/2009 1:54:00 AM

the ocean scenes are nice to read, you take my mind on a ride. -Boo

Tyler Martin

Date: 2/23/2009 1:20:00 AM

Sitting by the ocean is a nice feeling. Yo done an amazing job with this one. Tyler

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/23/2009 1:04:00 AM

Tranquil moments of peace they are, Stunning work Raul. Love E.

Jen H.

Date: 2/22/2009 3:03:00 PM

Well written, beautiful imagery. Wish I was there... ~Jen~

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/22/2009 6:04:00 AM

This is so beautiful Raul.. I want to be there my friend.

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/22/2009 5:45:00 AM

Well this is such an excellent Haiku, I am simply there. You nailed it. A moving and breathtaking visual. Love, Shar

Arany P.

Date: 2/22/2009 1:36:00 AM

yes, i would love that moment... great haiku, my friend!! nicely done! ~ Arany

Brian Strand

Date: 2/22/2009 12:31:00 AM

Beautiful image Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Date: 2/21/2009 10:19:00 PM

Being by the water fills me with tranquilty too so I can really relate to your words. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/21/2009 8:40:00 PM

Excellent imagery, Raul. Beautiful Haiku, as always perfect! Love, Robin

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/21/2009 8:17:00 PM

I really like this Raul, I so love the beach and this takes me there. BG