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Traitorous Ann

Some think that love is as strong as hate, And still others as sturdy as a Flander’s mare. If both be true then I don’t think Ann loved me, For if she indeed loved me then the two I swear Are just as false as a fowler’s artful noose. You should think that ten years is not a time too short, The period Ann and I were inseparable honeyed mates. Her heart was always mine and our breath was one Till I saw her off to the airport and to the United States,- A distance she cursed from home to that tinted hawk. I have never heard or read from my darling Ann And I think our avowed affections are sadly done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/1/2015 1:53:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning marvel Hannington!
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Date: 7/31/2015 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Hannington a 7.Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/31/2015 1:40:00 PM
HANNINGTON, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Date: 7/31/2015 4:18:00 AM
very touching poem Hannington - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/31/2015 12:07:00 AM
I liked how you wove colloquialisms into this love and love lost story, Hannington. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/8/2015 1:35:00 PM
Your pain is evident in this moving piece. Good descriptive language. Love, Kim
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Date: 5/8/2015 8:34:00 AM
Hi, Hannington a very nice write. #7
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Date: 5/8/2015 1:42:00 AM
- Good morning from Norway - Ann wants to go a different road, a touching poem - I wish you a beautiful weekend, Hannington :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/6/2015 7:24:00 AM
This one has a haunting sadness weaving through the beauty of your words. Awesome!
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Date: 5/6/2015 3:27:00 AM
I think you should forget Ann if you can. She certainly inspired this beautiful sad write. #7
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