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Trained In Love

Love you Each single day I do Doing My best always To tame Taming My beating heart To hear Hearing Your words, your thoughts Your life Living We twice as well As one Oneness Is a blessing We Share Sharing Is the dictum Practiced Practice Makes perfect, yet Stays flawed Our flaws Teach us lessons Absorbed Absorb Life's examples Wisely Wisdom A lifetime quest We seek Seeking With joy and want We find Finding Is the toughest Challenge Challenged We persevere Daily Our days We live out well A pair Us Paired We emerge strong We do 19~12~2014 Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux Contest Name: Mussetle Train

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 9:00:00 PM

Nice win Maurice...PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/10/2015 12:08:00 AM

You have perfected this form, Armand! I'm sure your train is the longest on the winner's list and your last stanza is just as good as your first. My favorite stanza, "oneness is a blessing we share" is heartfelt and touching...congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda

Abdul Malik

Date: 1/6/2015 12:02:00 PM

A good one. Many congrats.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/5/2015 11:44:00 PM

This is wonderful,congrats Maurice...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2015 11:08:00 PM

dang, I hoped to see this one in top three, ARmand!! congrats for the win. It was splendid!

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/5/2015 5:12:00 PM

Hi Maurice, really liked your train ride! Excellent words within the form along with wisdom and advice! Congrats on your win! Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 1/5/2015 4:49:00 PM

Well done Mr train driver! I can see that you have been well trained! Congratulations on this fine win, Armand! // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 1/5/2015 4:01:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Armand:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/5/2015 3:27:00 PM

I vasselated on this one, it just as easily could have been a third place finish. I am pleased to see your name on my winners list.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2014 2:04:00 AM

I agree with Charmaine here. This is sure to be a top winner, Maurice. a 7!! (you really nailed it)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/20/2014 12:46:00 AM

I think We'll see this with the top winners..A favourite!Too many exceptional lines!!Charma

David Meade

Date: 12/19/2014 1:29:00 PM

I felt the power in this locomotive -- I saw your smiling face hanging out of the big engine -- hair blowing and you singing at the top of your voice! Nothing stopping this train -- well done dear brother.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/19/2014 1:08:00 PM

Love the sentiment and flow here Maurice - i think this will do well with Richard:-) hugs Jan xx