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Trail of Diamonds

My eyes close to dream the unknown abyss surrounds to where I don't know on opening, I'm alive I see trails of diamonds http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-14.php

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Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/2/2011 7:42:00 AM

Just so beautiful, I'm trying to imagine what those trails of diamond would look like...

James Peranteau

Date: 5/2/2011 5:53:00 AM

A thought provoking, well done Tanka my friend ! I'm going to end my session with you by reading that Limerick that seems appealing dear poet....james

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/2/2011 1:03:00 AM

I really like how you ended this one, James! Wonderful contrast to the abyss you speak of... :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2011 10:10:00 PM

great imagery. I quite like this one, James!

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/29/2011 2:01:00 PM

Enjoyed this (gem) of a piece James, certainly has added luster to my day.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/29/2011 1:45:00 PM

Wonderful imagery James and u know diamonds are a girls best friend..so where is this trail u say luv? creative and cleverly penned luv.. happy weekend..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/29/2011 1:15:00 PM

one for the books, james! sensational float of expressions capped with a greeaaat ending! :) hugggs, nette