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Tragedy

You are my unquenched thirst, that can be fulfilled with love. You're like a shooting star, That meteors burst. You weren't supposed to mean this much to me, and I wasn't supposed to fall in love. But, I don't wanna let go of this feeling now, as it's a blessing from Above. It wasn't with knives you tore my heart, but with words. And only if I could tell you, how much that hurts. But you're going to a distant land, beyond my reach. for now, I'm done with life, and with everything it had to teach. -Keyur Rawal

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Date: 6/4/2016 12:28:00 AM
Keyur, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Keyur Rawal
Date: 6/5/2016 9:29:00 AM
Hi. Thanks for such a warm welcome :)
Date: 6/2/2016 10:28:00 PM
Keyur,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Keyur Rawal
Date: 6/5/2016 9:30:00 AM
Hey there. It feels amazing to be around with such great people. Thanks. :)

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