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Healing:Tracing the Fault Line

Tracing The Fault Line Tracing the Fault Line wherever it goes This way that way...Oops! Watch your toes! Back to the core where all trauma began Daylight Midnight...Oops! Sinking sand! Tracing The Fault Line: each challenge a fault Old wounds New wounds...Oops! Just like salt! Replay each story... go back to the start Dig deep Down deep...Oops! Hold your heart! Tracing the Fault Line...back to the start Wherever it goes... Will heal your heart. ©deborah burch 11/23/2016

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/17/2016 8:34:00 AM

A giggle AND a wow. Pretty wise words here! Takes a while to negotiate the "blame game" minefield too;-). Huggalunkins ~ john

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/17/2016 11:07:00 AM

Lol!! Indeed it does john!!Thank you!! Big Hugggs. Deb

Darren White

Date: 12/10/2016 6:06:00 AM

You know, these mazes? On paper? Where you have to find the way from A to B, or from A to the center? That is what your poem reminds me of. Oops, wrong way, faulty shortcut. But eventually you get there and you heal your heart. And it flows too, great cadence, no oops there :)

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/10/2016 7:55:00 AM

Thanks Darren! Hugggs!:)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/5/2016 9:23:00 PM

What a beautiful poem with such wisdom, so sweet!

Deborah Burch
Date: 12/5/2016 9:27:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kindness,Art! Big Hugggs! Cap'n Deb