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Toxic State

Toxic state T ~ ime travelled together shone in altered narration O ~ nwards backwards a twitching apple in the fangs of X ~ enia lost in serpentine shreds shedding its skin I ~ n futile attempts of salvage he joined in the poison C ~ onversed concurred became part of the venomous S ~ tate of affairs when the relation had soured past T ~ atty repair descended corroded beyond recognition A ~ bjured endured injured acrimonious spite spat at T ~ able and bed overturned naked ground to the core E ~ jected he took his leave from a toxic relationship...

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Date: 12/18/2016 10:09:00 AM
Very good. Well composed. Wish you best
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/18/2016 10:40:00 AM
Thank you Anisha. I appreciate that. Wishes, Kai
Date: 12/17/2016 11:38:00 AM
Fabulous Kai! (Check your "T~time" did you intend to respell time). Acrostic well done. Big Hugggs deb
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Deborah Burch
Date: 12/17/2016 4:03:00 PM
Anytime!! ;) glad to help. Hugggs deb.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/17/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thanks for liking and for pointing out the double tt.
Date: 12/17/2016 7:12:00 AM
Great Acrostic, Kai. really like the flow and imagery.
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