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Touches Me

Touches Me By Nathan Hannen I have tried to reach her, But I can't grasp her flailing hand The continuation of music from the unseen band The contrast between desert, Sea, And rock, And land Or those things that touch you, Unforseen and unplanned A miracle in time, But I can't see her face Shadowy doubts leap and bound, And leave no trace The difference is the same, But no winner in this race I can't see you in my heart, In this confusing place The End

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Date: 2/25/2024 4:23:00 PM
I'm over any instilled place.....running round a place.....trying to tie my lace....such grace and its emphatic not inside problematic......rumbling in my mind its almost pneumatic.....don't create a place without a lace......some people are too shy to show it......give them a semblance of grace.....always let them tie a lace.
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Date: 2/25/2024 4:21:00 PM
I'm over any instilled place.....running round a place.....trying to tie my lace....such grace and its emphatic not inside problematic......rumbling in my mind its almost pneumatic.....don't create a place without a lace......some people are too shy to show it......give them a semblance of grace.....always let them tie a lace.
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Date: 2/13/2021 8:52:00 PM
A pleasure to find your charming poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Nathan ~
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Nathan Hannen
Date: 2/25/2024 3:15:00 PM
I have not been on here for so long.....been writing ditties and little things ever since.....I'm very proud of this.
Date: 1/17/2011 2:32:00 PM
A depressing dream that one wishes to never come true
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Nathan Hannen
Date: 2/25/2024 4:04:00 PM
I cannot believe I'm in the book ??
Date: 1/17/2011 2:31:00 PM
A depressing dream that one wishes to never come true
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Date: 2/25/2024 4:06:00 PM
An old man once said in a fit of laughter.....the writing was a severe mindset.....thanks Autumn its a wonderful name.. ??

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