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Tortured Hearts

It strains against chains that hold it bound. It dies a thousand deaths slowly it drowns. It is told 'No, no, no' but it just wants a chance. The head screams 'just let it go' so it is forced to dance. it dreams of freedom it wants just to run. it wishes things were simpler like when it was young. it screams like a banshee of the pain it is wrought. It cries late at night as the chains are pulled taut. It feels almost empty like it's missing it's parts. all it needs is a smile one of many tortured hearts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/12/2016 7:23:00 PM
It's well wrote, and flows, and even in that it's excruciating in its meaning. I love the lines "It dreams of freedom it wants to run. it wishes things were simpler like when it was young." I think sometimes love and happiness get complicated in our lives, this speaks to me. Glad you're here with us on Poetry Soup!
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Date: 6/4/2016 12:44:00 AM
Alexander, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 6/3/2016 8:14:00 AM
Oh I like it.."the head screams 'just let it go" so it is forced to dance" I can feel the agony, well done.
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Date: 6/2/2016 10:17:00 PM
Deep write, Alexander....LINDA
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Date: 6/2/2016 10:17:00 PM
PS, Alexander, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/2/2016 8:20:00 PM
Very moving poem... sighs beautified...
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