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Torn

The heart urges me to feel and despite my endless searching all I feel is nothing The mind urges me to see Yet despite my many attempts all I see is darkness The forbidden part of me urges me to taste But despite my continued seeking all I taste is blood The voices in my head urges me to hear Only despite my constant straining all I hear is silence The breath in my lungs urges me to smell Although despite my unceasing tries all I smell is death The heart urges me to feel, but the numb do not feel. The mind urges me to see, but the blind do not see. The forbidden part of me urges me to taste, but the broken do not taste. The voices in my head urge me to hear, but the deaf do not hear. The breath in my lungs urges me to smell, but the dead do not smell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/13/2015 10:26:00 PM
Great write. Yes we live among our contradictions and paradoxes every day, so darn frustrating sometimes, but at least we recognize it, attempt to fight through them, and don't languish in confusion or denial.
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:30:00 PM
Abigail - this is really deep. I like it a lot. It describes how I feel, but I've never heard anybody else put it into words. Thanks for writing this.
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Abigail Tatum
Date: 4/12/2015 10:24:00 PM
Ur welcome. I'm glad you like it:) I worked hard on it and I'm gald that u could empathize with it ~@bi

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