Tormenting Abyss

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TORMENTING ABYSS

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, 19 OCTOBER 2016, MY PICTURE (c)

Hell: The tormenting abyss where souls are entrapped following the path of darkness! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 19 October 2016

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/19/2016 8:32:00 AM

A sobering thought my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/19/2016 8:36:00 AM

Yes, it is but every religion is talking about it in one way or the other thus we have to consider it in our poetry! Thank you my friend, Richard!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 10/19/2016 6:53:00 AM

Words for thought. Well put.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/19/2016 7:18:00 AM

Scott, my friend, what a delightful surprise! Thank you!

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/19/2016 6:33:00 AM

Shuddering! ... thank you for the relief from the radiant flower ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/19/2016 7:10:00 AM

You welcome my friend, Probir! We shouldn't expect such a treat over there though! haha!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2016 5:53:00 AM

- God does not want anyone to perish - people are perishing because of their own choice - There is only one door to Heaven Eternal life - Great written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/19/2016 7:13:00 AM

That is what I say my friend with the verb "following" which shows willingness to do something! Thank you so much for your always precious visits and comments dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs

David Smith

Date: 10/19/2016 5:25:00 AM

Even if only one takes heed my friend it is not wasted. Did not get elected but my ideas out there. No regrests. Regards from that man in NZ

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/19/2016 7:16:00 AM

I was not elected seven times my friend but this never stopped me fighting for my beliefs! There is always a second and third time. If they are smart enough they will vote for you! Thank you my friend for visiting!