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Torment of a Blood Moon

alone ‘neath the full moon my heart once bright with hope, now dimmed how I wished you were here with me as the moon bled with my heart shadows of past love traversed the orb ruby halo I longed to share with you watching as a shadow slid across the moon shooting star left its contrail in ebony sky smiling, I saw your heart in the scarlet moon where are you now, my love magic moments we once shared my spirits sank - torment of a blood moon *While we were watching the moon, we saw a shooting star! Co-written with a friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/10/2014 8:20:00 PM
This poem is very enchanting, yet it has a hint of sadness to it. Quite a beautiful write, Carolyn. I really enjoyed reading your winning poem! Congratulations to you!.... Thank you so much for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
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Date: 5/10/2014 4:06:00 PM
Ah..yes..I can see the similarities with mine....wonderful write Carolyn...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/8/2014 1:18:00 PM
pensive and wonderfully expressed, carolyn... sweet congrats with huggs
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Date: 5/7/2014 9:36:00 AM
passionate lovely pen Caroline congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/7/2014 7:58:00 AM
Carolyn, this is very, very good. I love the structure—how you wove the stanzas into a seamless blend. Clever, adroit melange. And congratulations.
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Date: 5/7/2014 7:54:00 AM
Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, carolyn
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Date: 5/7/2014 5:03:00 AM
Lovely write Carolyn ! hearty perfect to the theme ,, congrats on great win !
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:35:00 PM
How sad.....and how lovely this is! What a lovely co-write.....and so nice you had a friend to share that moment!! Congrats to you Carolyn!
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:30:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn. Nice to see you writing and wining. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:22:00 PM
aww. good stuff, well placed 2nd wtg
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:11:00 PM
Wonderful Carolyn, so nice to see you writing again & the only one so far that realized it only happens with a full moon. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/6/2014 5:46:00 PM
Lovely and romantic, yet sad, Carolyn! Much enjoyed. // congrats on a fine win. // paul
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Date: 4/17/2014 6:10:00 PM
i saw the blood moon that evening. i guess i can say i shared it with you old friend. but i missed the shooting star.
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Date: 4/17/2014 9:48:00 AM
Lovely write!
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Date: 4/16/2014 7:19:00 PM
Very nicely done Carol ,,,, I watched it, though I never saw a shooting star. You have a blessed Easter :)
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Date: 4/16/2014 1:30:00 PM
A very special piece Carolyn! faving this impeccable voice of expression!
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Date: 4/15/2014 11:44:00 PM
Hi Carolyn. Wish I could have been there; I watched that awesome event alone. It was a cool moment, however, just as are your poems--real cool. I like your style and enjoy your writes. Kudos! Hope to see ya soon. Love and hugs, Mel :)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/16/2014 12:46:00 PM
Mel, I wish you could have been with us too! I'll be dropping by to read your words. Blessings for a joyful Easter, Carolyn
Date: 4/15/2014 10:32:00 PM
You two birds have your heads in the clouds! You are darling! (Can I say darling these days!?) melancholy write....but in a sweet way...and sincere....love, jimbo
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/16/2014 12:45:00 PM
Dear Jim, It is an honor to have someone call me "darling." You are such a wonderful friend and I hope Easter brings moments of joy to your life. Love you, dear one. Carolyn
Date: 4/15/2014 8:44:00 PM
Favorite lines: 'as the moon bled with my heart' and 'watching as a shadow slid across the moon' I am SO glad to see you posting your poems again...Every verse is brilliant but I can't help but wonder who wrote what...Would you mind Soup or emailing me? Also my humble thanks for your kind and encouraging comments on my poems - Tim
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/16/2014 12:48:00 PM
Hi Tim, I wrote the verses in italics and Sandra wrote the verses in regular type. We enjoy writing together. Have a wonderful Easter! Carolyn
Date: 4/15/2014 8:39:00 PM
The combination is seamless. The visual and the visceral, the heart and soul, and a lonely moon.
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Date: 4/15/2014 6:15:00 PM
Wow..That is fantastic...You love is shining down on you....hugs Tim
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