Too Much Halloween (Revised) Footle

No Way I Say I Nag BIG Bag Dandy Candy Crummy Tummy

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/27/2009 7:27:00 AM

yep, that's how it goes, congrats on the HM in the cotest, love it!!

Date: 10/26/2009 6:03:00 PM

What an enjoyable poem. Got a chuckle out of it. Congratulations on your win in the footle contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/26/2009 4:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/26/2009 6:55:00 AM

Way to go, Barbara! Congrats on your success in Donna's contest! Love you, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/26/2009 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your winning footle!! ~ Great job!~ Love, Carrie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/26/2009 4:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Donnas' contest with this wonderful Footle, Barbara! Very clever and so true! Love, Robin

James Fraser

Date: 10/26/2009 4:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win in Donna's footle contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2009 3:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Donna's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Donna Golden

Date: 10/25/2009 11:03:00 PM

Crummy tummy is right! I've already had too much Halloween candy and it isn't even Halloween, yet! Congratulations on your placing in the Footle Fright contest! Hugs, Donna

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 5:48:00 PM

Tooth brush must rush! LOL One year, a dentist in a nearby neighborhood that we visited gave out toothbrushes and sample toothpaste. It was a great idea. And a good education when the kids dumped out all of their candy for their parents to look it over. Clever don't you think? I enjoyed your sentiments in this poem. Lovingly, Dane PS I let my kids eat all of the candy they wanted at Halloween. NO RESTRICTIONS. Then, after a couple of days, they regulated their own sweet intake. Hum?

Marty Owens

Date: 10/22/2009 7:34:00 PM

Nice footles says....... Party Marty