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Too Good To Be True

The first time I saw you and looked in your eyes, I felt the trust and the love, and my heart wanted to cry. Then over and over, you told me, that our, love was forever, and you would hold me close ever, that you would give me the moon. You told me, "I will always be a heartbeat away." But, it was not real, it was a fairy tale love, I can still hear your tender words, and I believed in forever. It was not true, just a dream, a wish, you promised me the sun. I won't say goodbye, I can't yet, and my heart is trembling still, as I place a red rose on your eternal cold grave. ________________________________ December 21, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Too Good To Be True Copyright Protected, ID 16-859-863-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 12/22/2016 7:52:00 PM
It WAS real, though, dear heart. And very tragic what happened. This is awesome for the contest!!
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Date: 12/22/2016 12:51:00 PM
sad and beautiful, dear constance.. soupie for you..huggs
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