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Tonight I Pray

Above grey skies and a mirthless moon clouded by starlight in a world unknown within my thoughts of then and now of pleasure and pain longing to feel free and whole again In darkness and silence my pensive thoughts stray Hoping and praying you'll be okay In the back on my mind and deep in my soul you'll be with me forever in a heart that you stole

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/5/2017 4:47:00 AM
The only thing I want to do here, is hug you..... and so I will (((HUG)))
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Date: 8/16/2015 9:11:00 AM
Hi Tim, this is something that I think some of us can relate to. Praying for that certain someone, that they are ok, feeling their absence, yet still wanting to know that all is well with them. Beautiful yet also somehow sad thoughts in your pen. Thank you so much for passing by my post, for saying what you said. Yes, the weight of silence sometimes, could mean so much.
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Date: 8/5/2015 7:15:00 PM
Nicely done
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Date: 8/5/2015 10:31:00 AM
Isn't this beautiful ? , I love your emotions here, Im sure your prayers will be heard...Charma
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Date: 8/5/2015 4:48:00 AM
Your prayer will be answered for no one would resist to the beauty of the writing, dear Tim!
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Date: 8/5/2015 2:34:00 AM
You pulled my heart strings Tim... romantic! ~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 8/4/2015 10:57:00 PM
Honest thoughts. It may go somewhere :)
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Date: 8/4/2015 7:09:00 PM
quite romantic, Tim. You do romance very well.
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Date: 8/4/2015 4:52:00 PM
simply charming Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx
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