Tomorrow

Do you know a man called”Tomorrow”? I don’t, not even the astrologers. He mingles in silence’ A question, to every person he meets. He smiles, he weeps as we do, For every other thing. Yes I had met him, today as I walked. He was young and handsome, An incarnation of darkness, Well, do you know the question he asks, Take my word…………as I do not, if till tomorrow I will last.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/6/2013 11:17:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. Light & Love

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 7/10/2013 3:12:00 AM

Thank you Debbie. I am also delighted to be a part of this group.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/5/2013 9:20:00 PM

I know this man tomorrow, he awaits for me in my everyday future... i wonder now how long it will last... i hope this man tomorrow will always come... xox~ LINDA

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 7/10/2013 3:11:00 AM

It will.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/5/2013 9:19:00 PM

Hello Bidhu, stopping by to say i miss my new poet friends, haven't had time to stop by... glad I found this one... xox~ PD

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 7/10/2013 3:10:00 AM

You are always with us. But feels better when you stop by ;)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/4/2013 11:13:00 AM

WOW...amazing thought processes winding through this one. A profound view of tomorrow... :)

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 7/10/2013 3:09:00 AM

Thank You Karen..

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/4/2013 8:50:00 AM

'He was young and handsome'...then it suddenly flips to 'an incarnation of darkness'...Outstanding! - Tim

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 7/10/2013 2:56:00 AM

Thank you Sir..I am honored.

John Posey

Date: 7/1/2013 5:31:00 AM

Hidden perception, when found, brings pleasure from the page to the heart of sincere readers.... Your work is pleasing to read... I will visit more later...Jake

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 7/2/2013 3:28:00 AM

Thank you Sir. I am honored.