Tommy Why

Tommy a terror to the villagers Tommy a nuisance to the people Tommy why so trouble the people Tommy girls flee on seeing you Tommy what is sacred to you Tommy please change your way Tommy were you not born with us Why do you so trouble us Tommy Why every day invite curses Tom

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 1/24/2017 4:48:00 AM

Very sad..... Thank you for sharing this piece, bro.

Lewis Nyaga
Date: 2/1/2017 9:28:00 AM

Thanks bro..

Jan Allison

Date: 1/5/2017 5:15:00 AM

Sounds like 'Tommy' is a rotten apple in the barrel:-( There are some who seem to incite trouble wherever they are Lewis - they light the blue touch paper, and watch the fireworks explode:-( hugs Jan xx

Lewis Nyaga
Date: 1/9/2017 11:12:00 PM

Thanks Jan, for reading my poem and those comments.. brought a smile to me this morning..// Almighty blessing in the new year