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i lovey love-love youu more then i can say. you wont ever understand the way i felt keeping you was like a dreem and we should be togther why did it end i wish i knew just keep the lovey-love love until i see you agian i cant wait it might not ever be the same but i dont care becaues you love me to i love you

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Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/12/2010 2:45:00 PM

Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2010 9:44:00 AM

Interesting topic that you have chosen for your poem...There seems to be a great number of writes about love and love loss on here and other sites and don't forget the he or she has done me wrong...Sara

Mike Ruff

Date: 7/12/2010 3:21:00 AM

I like how you completely abandoned rhyme and reason, skill, meter, imagery, creativity, effort, and cognitive thought all-together to make this wonderful poem. A great write.