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Today My Mother

Today a hummingbird flew by my face She proceeded to land with so much grace She stared at me and cocked her head In my eyes I could see, in my heart she had read Today I saw the shape of an angel in the clouds She winked at me and waved so proud As her shape changed to a heart so far above I knew you were there spreading your love Today in my yard, a rose bloomed so huge It's colors so bright and seeming a fugue Each petal was perfect and delicate too Today that rose reminded me of you Today my heart feels heavy and sad But I know you are telling me please be glad Today was the day you left this earth It's been one year since you left family and hearth Today I lost a mother and best friend My world as I knew it crashed to an end Today you have shown me to look all around In all you will see me as I am no longer bound Today you have shown me to dry my tears I am no longer in pain, I no longer fear Look to your heart, you will find me there In all things you do, do them with care My daughters, my sons, my husband and grandchildren too Today believe me when I say I am always with you I will be with you always, I am never away By your side I remain each and every day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/7/2016 2:17:00 AM
ELSIE, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/29/2016 10:50:00 PM
awesome to read this one again, Elsie. linda
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Date: 6/21/2015 1:27:00 PM
- Welcome to P Soup, Elsie ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2015 1:35:00 AM
Hi Elsie, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/21/2015 12:47:00 AM
Elsie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/20/2015 11:57:00 PM
Lovely, heartfelt, comforting verse, Elsie. Reminds me of the sentiments expressed in the poem 'do not stand at my grave and weep'- our loved one's still echo and resonate in all that we see around us. Take solace in these things. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I am sure you will find much here to enjoy with us. Viv x
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Date: 6/20/2015 7:50:00 PM
Heartfelt. My fav line "Today you have shown me to look all around In all you will see me as I am no longer bound"
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