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To Your Health - Monotetra

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Here's a great plan for you to follow And to me this, doesn't ring hollow If you want your skin, face to glow And hair will grow,and hair will grow. Start drinking lots of water each day And eat lots of vegetables too. Have plenty fresh fruits they all say. Do this each day, do this each day. These steps will be very good for you. Begin exercise as well too. Start something you would like to do. A doctor see, a doctor see. And make sure you get good-night sleep. Relax your mind, don't let stress creep. Strive for joy & great attitude keep. Have fun don't weep, have fun don't weep. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 October,31,2014

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/27/2023 4:20:00 AM

Dorian, your poem is a delightful blend of rhythm and wisdom. Using the Monotetra form to convey important health advice is creative and practical, making the message memorable and engaging. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel

Uji Rho

Date: 11/27/2023 4:07:00 AM

Nice.

Vera Duggan

Date: 11/4/2014 6:16:00 PM

Hi Dorian, what a great regime to follow, maybe I should have followed it then I might not have arthritis now, we do eat healthy and if I take after my 97 year old mother I think I will do well, I love the way you have written this, hopefully it will make people wake up and think, take care my friend..........Vera..........

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 10:36:00 PM

Hi Vera my dear sweet friend. So nice always to hear from you. I do hope you you take after your mother. So sorry to hear that youre suffering with arthritis, that's not good at all. Please take good care of yourself. I am a believer that is never too late to do changes for most things in life, especially when is for good or better quality in ones living. I am not an health expert or nutritionist but doing research and using common sense helps a lot to take care of ourselves in every way we can. Glad you enjoyed my poem. :) thanks so much for your visit, comments and all. love and many warm hugs! Xxx D.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/4/2014 4:32:00 PM

i read dorian the most powerful prayer of happiness i cried feeling the deepest grief in his loving us so much so when i read it feeling our lords pain st bridgit of sweden wrote the fifteen prayers when he himself appeared to her our lord jesus his words wow he is the master of writing never read anything so powerful moved me completely

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 10:44:00 PM

Hi my dear friend Liam! I am sending you soup mail very shortly. Take care! Love and hugs! :) Xxxxx D.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 4:45:00 PM

You're such a sweet and sensitive good man after my own heart, Liam Mcdaid! I just wished all men have your kindness, gentleness and tenderness of heart. A real one and that love that thru you and your poetry I admire and inspires anyone with a heart willing to love. You're so sweet and loving my dear friend Liam. I am so happy I met you here at the soup! take good care and God bless you, give you more strengh and light. I know I got you started and that's okay with me.lol...Hugs! :) xxxx D.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/4/2014 4:02:00 PM

to well i know that dorian darkness and pain unavoidable sometimes bless you pal i always pray and face the light people can be cruel in the name of love but we all know the face that judges not love its always forgiving holds no darkness smiling you got me started

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 4:18:00 PM

Yes, I know what you mean Jesus tells us so much about love and forgiveness. That's the most beautiful and amazing message of Gods divine love and His perfection in the Holy Book.We can only try to imitate Him in all the best we can, even when sometimes is so hard because of our imperfect nature and our sinful flesh always leaning to sin and such, which we must battle and try to conquer everyday.I am like you always trying to focus my sights on Him and not the world or anyone for good example, but only in God himself and Jesus, and forgive and pray for the rest.Praying is so important and vital.thank you for your sweet comments again. Keep u in mine now, Liam. Hugs! :) Xxxx D.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/4/2014 1:48:00 PM

if only our hearts and minds could bathe in happiness and joy forever we would sing smiling excellent pen dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 10:07:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Liam,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xoxox D

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/4/2014 3:46:00 PM

I know my sweet friend, sadly sometimes this that you say, it can't be all the time. Life and certain people and very painful events can send us all in tears and embraces us in darkness and pain.thank you for your kind visit Liam.Hugs! :) xxxx D.

David Meade

Date: 10/31/2014 11:41:00 PM

I drink a popeye smoothie every morning!! a garden based diet has lowered by cholesterol by almost 50 points. Great poem and good living!!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/31/2014 11:51:00 PM

Good for you David! A clever thing to do for you. Spinach is very healthy and can make you super strong like Popeye. ;) thank you for your visit and wonderful comments. much appreciated. ;) Xxxx D.

Dan Helppi

Date: 10/31/2014 9:52:00 PM

Dorian, nice to see advice I can use, thanks.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/31/2014 10:05:00 PM

And nice to know that Dan! And thank you for visiting my page and commenting so kindly. Happy Halloween and best to you! ;) xxxx D.