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Finally a place Amongst the chaos Of cyperspace Where my meager Scribblings are read By kind eyes and Appreciative hearts No more trepidation When I click on That ominous button COMMENTS Because someone has cut My idea to pieces Perhaps because I Am no good – or – Perhaps because I Am better than they Now I can eagerly Await the positive message Or well worded Criticism and I feel I am a better artist Because of this place. Thank-you, Soup For giving me a home For my thoughts, and ideas And my creative spirit. Written April 7, 2010

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Date: 6/16/2010 12:41:00 PM
I liked this..my sentiments also:)
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Date: 4/7/2010 1:26:00 PM
Welcome to the ps site. The encouragement here is overwhelming. Great write, thank you for sharing. Caryl
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Date: 4/7/2010 1:16:00 PM
great tribute to the soup, you have a gem of a poem here. Great poet friends also.
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Date: 4/7/2010 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Faleshia. Right back at you!
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Date: 4/7/2010 11:27:00 AM
you are a great poet and don't let anyone tell you different believe in yourself and keep on writting my dear friend faleshia
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