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To the Beach

Sky so unmarred this torrid day, That, to the beach, let’s make our way! To the beach, to the beach, Where we’ll watch sea oats sway And glad toddlers at play, Where we’ll hear ospreys screech, Lying clear of tide’s reach Cooled in sea breeze all day— Yes, off to the beach, Where, your bikini you’ll flaunt As, on waves, sunbeams glitter While sand castles rise And we cavort in chill surf: Oh, the beach beckons today. October 20, 2016 Three Style II Poetry Contest/ Laura Loo

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Date: 3/8/2018 5:15:00 PM
A beautiful ode to THE BEACH!
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Date: 10/23/2016 2:49:00 AM
Dear David, congratulations on your great win! ! amazing beach...and fun in this poem!//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/22/2016 10:17:00 PM
Very good, David, congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/22/2016 11:00:00 AM
you make me want to go far away to swim in a lovely ocean! lovely imagery David...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :) -luloo
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David Bose
Date: 10/22/2016 7:51:00 PM
Thanks, lulloo, not only for your kind opinion of my piece, but for all your work hosting this contest. I see in a short time as a souper that people like you make the site a success. Thanks!
Date: 10/20/2016 3:37:00 PM
I like that! :) Makes me want to go to the beach!
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