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To Sin Against Your Lovers Heart

Eyes burning with the oceans of the sky, what have I done, why wont I die? Heart aching with the brutality of the desert, it should lay in tatters, I hate myself for the matter. Cruelty done is cruelty deserved, no longer shall my love be honored and revered. Humbled down, I am a slave, Begging for forgiveness, that shan't be gave. Skin scorching with the heat of hast, amendments taken without pain being erased. Evil jinn, desert fox, leave me now, leave me forgot. Retribution, I have much to do, But will I ever make it up to you? Eyes burning with the pain of my heart, what have I done to you, why wont I die and part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/25/2012 5:01:00 PM
A goodd write my friend. You describe the pain of knowing you have done real damage to your bond. When we admit our mistakes we can learn from them. When we refuse to admit we made a mistake, that's when it's too much to fix. In order to repair a break we must first see the damage. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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