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I'm so sorry I wrote late I appreciate all my comments I wish, my comments could be Be supper, supper... Fast I'm a mother raising five Wrote my first book, very proud Boy that book took some work Even got deleted, from it's brain The day I went, to play Writing forty thousand words, in four days Wow That's a big cloud Man I know, I made a lot of mistakes Oh, well I just hope, it sells This autobiography so true One to bring many, on their knees Then , I wanted my poems I wanted these web-sites I wanted the world to know my talent But, but It's so hard to say, When I saw the mistakes in my first book I wanted to grab a hook Determine on walking away Until the day I saw my comments Comments from many, I don't know Many reading my poems Feeling my thoughts Looking inside Showing me , my pride This pride as a writer Hoping for the best The best in my writing The best of me The me, hiding behind this screen Hiding my thoughts Afraid to, write my comments Until the day I sat a read Read all my comments Realizing I'm touching many souls Understanding, we all make mistakes But, if you mean it from the heart Feel it in your soul You shall let go Let go of this fear In this fear to write Write these comments to all Have this poem in your eyes So you may feel Feel my apologies, for a late comment A comment sent to you.... D.L.V

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Date: 10/12/2020 7:13:00 AM
Hello! I missed somehow that you follow me. Thank you for that compliment. I just want to say, i just read 2/3 of your poem. I relate to 1/2. (See 'Your words'- in relation to this one). I must tell you, though, that your poetry is an inspiration. I love the way you perceive and describe to the world. Obviously, you have had a very challenging time. I relate. It has shaped you into a very unique poetess, gifting us with knowledge and empathy. You are a new fave. Thanks
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Date: 10/28/2010 2:24:00 PM
Keep your composing.... fun and flowing!! wElcome to poetry soup!
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Date: 10/28/2010 1:17:00 PM
We are all human beings and we do some appreciation some encouraging to keep our muse activated, Delilah
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