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To Love Within

To love within is like seeing the night sky, filled with wondrous and sparkling lights. The innermost feeling we love to treasure, Holding hands while watching the moon. The sweetness of kisses, the warmth of embrace, Feeling each seconds that never will fade. Looking into your brown eyes, my dreams fulfilled. To love and hold forever, our promise in heaven. Dancing in a silent music while you wrap around me. No one could replace it, no one will do. To love within,the best feeling I found with you.

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Date: 8/21/2016 4:25:00 PM
So beautiful..you have such an elegance to your writing...the emotions expressed feel so full of gratitude and sheer bliss for the wonderful "love" you have been blessed with.:-) A truly inspiring piece that is a joy to read :-) A for sure favourite. bundles of blessings, lynn enjoy a great evening...and a lovely tomorrow :-)
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Date: 9/4/2014 1:31:00 PM
This is lovely, Aiyah! You start off with a captivating line....loving within like the night sky. May you always find happiness with the one you love! // paul
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:46:00 PM
Hi Aiyah, I miss you, sorry, I've been in and out of the soup a lot... It was nice to see you comment an old blog. I'm also happy you found that feeling, to love within... Wish, I had the same thing going for me... love Linda
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