To Edit

To Edit to recover to renew to rediscover to change the existing to realize my own mistakes to change the innocence to redo the first words spoken can I fix the Broken ? to Edit .

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John Pen

Date: 7/16/2014 8:36:00 AM

I like it. No, edit that. I love it

Shanity Rain
Date: 7/16/2014 3:15:00 PM

You're sweet and Adorable ~ You have me at ."No, edit that "

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 7/14/2014 8:36:00 PM

I really like that...great title too! Ana

Shanity Rain
Date: 7/15/2014 11:10:00 PM

Thank-you very much , you inspire me with kindness !

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 7/31/2013 6:59:00 PM

No thanks required Yvette, none at all. And absolutely, we can chat, I'd like that. MC

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/18/2014 10:06:00 PM

Cool Busy Lady!

Shanity Rain
Date: 7/16/2014 3:17:00 PM

you know I still adore you my friend , will check soup mail soon, just a break from working 12 hr shifts !

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/7/2013 7:54:00 AM

Our Brave poet in war ..I wishing you come home soon , Thank-you for protecting us ~

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 7/29/2013 8:24:00 PM

Been here before, in poetry and in life. Kind of the same, it's said a poem is never really finished. I've edited poems after 20 years, life is the same way. Just when you think you've figure yourself out...you reinvent, you edit. This was very good, a lot in a few lines -Great Poem Yvette!!! MC

Shanity Rain
Date: 7/29/2013 11:09:00 PM

Thank-you . I love this site , it allows me to express and read others , so much Talent. you yourself are quite amazing ~ I guess we have to pass on to be the noticed ? Just a litle Humor there my Friend , Lots to chat about , Yvette Thank-you for serving Our Country .