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To a Fool

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To a Fool

I underestimated the search 
and came out a fool 
I trekked through the lowest valleys
and with shadows as my fuel 
I looked for answers everywhere 
and everywhere found ghouls 
I searched for this thing you call love 
and all I found was cruel

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  1. Date: 9/14/2012 1:01:00 AM
    Wow, what a profound poem. I especially liked the fourth verse "with shadows as my fuel" perhaps you can illuminate this for me further when you get time. what I got from it was: in the search for love no concrete love was found only formless shadows that moved along the ground i.e. the shadows were the fuel but leading to nowhere. Beautiful, Excellently written piece. You might want to have this critiqued to polish it up a bit. Excellent work

    Hadi Avatar Leila Hadi
    Date: 9/14/2012 10:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the awesome feedback. You're spot on with your interpretation. The shadows refer to glimpses of love I encounter that have no substance. It's the shadows that lead me to the light obstructor.
  1. Date: 9/11/2012 2:23:00 PM
    So sad..... - but well written Leila. - oxox big hug to you // Anne-Lise :)

    Hadi Avatar Leila Hadi
    Date: 9/13/2012 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks :) I know i must seem like a miserable person lol but I only get writing urges when im upset. This is an old reworded poem.
  1. Date: 9/11/2012 1:49:00 PM
    Nice poem (a bit sad though)... Terry

    Hadi Avatar Leila Hadi
    Date: 9/13/2012 8:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, hope I didn't bring you down reading it.