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To Walk In Winter Blue

At the edge of dawn, to climb the path, along the windswept hills The world lies blue, from a downy night, and views serene and still The world is hushed, nowhere to rush, at least that’s how it seems I will walk along a crystal stream, as if it still my dream The arching sky, surrounds my eyes, a morning star that shines As sun comes up to tint the snow, with pink among the pines The birds and deer have reappeared, and all the things that creep Below the hills, a sparkling town, is soon aroused from sleep The world is changed from winter’s blue to soft and ermine white A snowglobe world, is all aglow, of winter kissed delight My soul refreshed, with frosty breath, and I find my worries cease Contentment comes on silken wings, my world seems filled with peace _______________________________________________ For Juli Michelle's Contest: Winter Blue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/21/2014 2:09:00 PM
I enjoyed reading a very nice walk. Congratulation on win
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Date: 1/21/2014 9:10:00 AM
Interesting write on winter's blues and congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 11/30/2011 10:55:00 AM
As always nice to see you at the top of the list once again where you belong Carrie. Magnificent write. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2011 11:44:00 AM
Well written with pervasive descriptiveness. Congratulations on garnering the top spot in Francine's contest.
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Date: 11/28/2011 11:43:00 PM
congrats on your first place win in the contest Carrie, just what I needed to make winter seem nicer
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Date: 11/17/2011 4:44:00 PM
I love to walk and think I'll make myself get up to do it at this time. Sounds like a wonderful experience!
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Date: 11/17/2011 4:16:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Great one that should be in the winners' cirlce..Good luck..Sara
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Date: 11/17/2011 6:26:00 AM
* "Beautiful * Just Like You * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/16/2011 7:24:00 PM
I'm in favor of the last few lines myself! It's a special world which appears right on the onset of dawn! Awesome work!!
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Date: 11/16/2011 7:06:00 PM
I love the first two stanzas. Rock on, Carrie! yep ~N
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