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To Elizabeth

To me, fair friend, you never can be old,
For as you were when first your eye I eye'd,
Such seems your beauty still. 
~ William Shakespeare

I have looked into the mirror
Looking for a trace....a trace of my youth
A trace of the girl that I used to be...
Is she there?  Buried deep? Is she still part of me?

Years can't be halted, change can't erase..
And my face, are the lines of experience
Stories and time...I see staring back at me
A part of me wants to grieve for that girl
The girl that I was..   Has she vanished for good?

Oh, I do understand....
That I can't hang on to "then"..
To days long ago, when time was our friend
When summers, together,  seemed never to end
But, then............ , here by chance, we meet up once again.....

Our friendship born in young, and carefree
You...with bright eyes, and brown hair that fell long
Around your high cheeks ...and a wide, gamin smile!
You were the one who's light shined so brightly
Who's charm, laugh, and wisdom I fondly admired
A girlhood where we danced together in sweet grass under sunny skies
And under nighttime stadium lights, to the music of the high school band

After years, that have taken us to separate worlds
In my mind, and in my dreams you have always been
The fair maiden, the one who held my hand
Two girls who made promises...who sat in the dark, under a summer sky
And talked of our "somedays", of our future, our hopes
By the light of the moon, we wished upon the stars

Now here in this moment, I have found you again
And here in this moment, I have found "me" again....
I can be that girl we share our history
our moment in the sun, ....I am "her", again!..
I can be that child, I can be fifteen, I can wear a crown, upon a teenaged throne... 
And I can still dance to the sound of the drum, and the tuba,
I can sing football songs, and gossip about the boys, 
   and make fun of the stuck-up girls
     and laugh about the teachers we didn't like, 
                   and about the night of the prom, when I cried in your arms

I can hear Johnny Mathis singing "Misty", and the words will make me weep
       I can hear "Canadian Sunset" as it lulls me off to sleep

Perhaps the stars have faded a bit...but beyond the weary miles
They still shine when I look into your dear friend, from the past...
They will shine through the ages.........where a summer will always  last....
                      ~                                    ~

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  1. Date: 5/22/2014 1:34:00 AM
    wow, incredibly bittersweet, carrie.. you shine.. sweet congrats!

  1. Date: 5/21/2014 9:48:00 AM
    Carrie,, CONGRATS, on your awesome win......~SKAT~

  1. Date: 5/18/2014 11:12:00 AM
    Hi Carrie, Congrats on your win. You have obviously put your heart and soul into your amazing poem. Very insightful, as I am sure most of us have felt such emotions throughout our lives when we can still recognise the younger version of ourselves. Well done on a spectacular write and win. All the best, Theresa xx

  1. Date: 5/16/2014 7:21:00 AM
    Wow! Amazing write! Congratulatiions on your win! Lori

  1. Date: 5/15/2014 9:23:00 PM
    Ah!!!! Exquisite deer Carrie. Many congrats on your win. Lainie

  1. Date: 5/15/2014 8:55:00 PM
    LOVE it, it is pure nostalgia. The best kind. I have seen about four in this contest that i adore and yours is one of them!!

  1. Date: 5/15/2014 7:36:00 PM
    Beautiful thoughts beautifully penned Carrie, congrats on the terrific winner!

  1. Date: 5/15/2014 5:48:00 PM
    Beautiful, Carrie. Looks like this one is still a winner. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 6:09:00 PM
    Congrats, Carrie. Excellent. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 2:26:00 AM
    Carrie ver nicely written. Time flees quickly. Congrats on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 11:30:00 PM
    It's fun to rekindle old friendships. It does make us feel younger for awhile. I think, sometimes, that's why I write. Thanks for the reminder! RAY

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:41:00 PM
    CARRIE, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win, in my contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 11:03:00 AM
    congrats Carrie on your win, David

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 8:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Carrie in the contest of Michael J Falotico "The Right Time". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 4:42:00 PM
    Wonderful narrative, Carrie. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 9:11:00 AM
    Wow Carrie, you kept me enthralled throughout this beauty.. Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest ;) lfde Wilma

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 6:07:00 AM
    imgaes running deep, carrie.. cheery kudos to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 5:23:00 AM
    this was a well written piece, congrats on your win cory

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 8:54:00 PM
    well-narrated...really deserving for the placement!!! CONGRATULATIONS! *-* junjun

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 2:15:00 PM
    My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, Carrie