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Painful hot season Eyes face vase grace all burning Buds bursting crimson ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ April 15, 2016

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Date: 4/15/2016 6:32:00 PM
that last line is really cool. Buds bursting crimson!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/15/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thanks for the cool comment.... Doesn't the bud open crimson?
Date: 4/15/2016 7:34:00 AM
Very relatable piece, Probir - great use of Haiku.
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