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Tiptoe

A dark and dreary road Quietly I tiptoed All battered I looked around No sign of life, just barren ground Wind blew, harsh and cold Keeping its story untold With its command, the leaves danced Roaring like a tigress, I stood tranced But I did not have time So I continued my climb I did not know where I was going Darkness all around, I was just tiptoeing Far away a wolf was crying As the cry kept amplifying I wondered what it was sad about I reasoned it may have a doubt I Looked forward, still no light No mercy for my plight I looked up at the shimmering sky Oh! How bad I wanted to fly I thought why not give it a try It's always nice to soar high I came down with a thud Grass turned red with my trickling blood I looked around for my friends All I saw was broken ends A tear came rolling down I wiped it off with a little frown It was just a modest fall So I came back tall And as I tiptoed On that dreary road The wolf kept crying And the cry kept amplifying I wondered what it was sad about I reasoned it may have a doubt

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Date: 3/15/2016 5:16:00 PM
Krisha, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Akanksha Bisht
Date: 3/15/2016 11:15:00 PM
Thanks a lot skat for the warm welcome and support I really appreciate that .. :)
Date: 3/14/2016 5:07:00 PM
Krisha, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Akanksha Bisht
Date: 3/14/2016 11:48:00 PM
Thanks a lot for your support... And I would love to know what u think about this poem as well...please free to give any kind of suggestions you might have..

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